- Close up - television fuzzing out
- Medium shot - girl puts in the aerial
- Wide shot - television turns loud whilst the girl jumps
- Close up - hand turning down the volume
- Wide shot - of the girl sitting watching television
- Close up - phone ringing upstairs - rings a few times
- Medium shot - girl goes to get up - phone stops ringing
- Close up - Television fuzzes out again
- Close up - aerial on the floor
- Extreme close up - girls eyes looking scared
- Medium shot - as she goes to put aerial in the phone starts ring again
- Following shot - of the girl running up stairs
- Medium shot - she enters the room
- Close up - goes to answer - call ends
- Extreme close up - of the face turning round quick after hearing a loud noise
- Close up - of the door handle and she opening it
- Close up - phone begins to ring again
- Medium shot - of her face being confused and worried
- Long shot - goes to answer the phone
- Wide shot - of picking up the phone which says unknown caller and then the door slams
- Long shot - of the corridor and all the doors begin to shut one after the other
- Close up - sitting in the corner worried and scared
- Wide shot - getting up and shutting the blinds
- Close up - phone starts calling
- Medium shot - answering the call
- Close up - listening to the call
- Two shots - of the girl and the person stalking behind her
- Close up - Man putting hands on the girls shoulder
- Close up - of the girls face looking and then goes to a black screen
THE END
Asset list
The things that I will be using are;
1. Phone
2. Sofa
3. Television and components
4. Bedroom
5. House
6. Blinds
7. Girl
8. Figure girl/boy
9. Camera
10. Tape
11. Tripod
12. Charger
The girl In the film will need to wear casual clothing and the figure will be dressed in all black.
Final..
Good use of camera angles and narrative to help create the atmosphere. May be helped by using few more different effects.
ReplyDeleteA really good opening sequence I really like how the music creates a tense and mysterious atmosphere, I also think the text stlye used was very appropriate as although it was quite plain it promoted a more mature and professional style. There was a good variety of camera angles used and made it interesting to watch.
ReplyDeleteThe voice over added to the opening sequence worked really well and ensured that the meaning and storyline for your film was clear whilst making it much more tense and strange.
To improve increasing the speed of the strobe may look more effetive and fading the music out at the end may also work but over all very good !
Like the plot of the opening. The unknown caller of the phone also makes it very spooky. I think that it would have been more clearer if the actor had the phone with her because it confused me a bit when she had to keep going up the stairs.
ReplyDeletewell done
The shots over the shoulder of the TV out of focus works really well and gives it an eery feeling, also the sound of the television adds to the effect as it sounds kind of distorted. All the shots were steady, and there was a good variety of shots. All of the material was appropriate for the theme, another good thing was when the screen flashes. The music and sound effects worked well.
ReplyDeleteHowever, towards the end I kind of lost track of what was going on and became a little confused, so to improve on the film you could maybe make the story line a bit clearer. Also at the end the girl is already upstairs but then it cuts to her being chased up the stairs when we hadn't seen her go down the stairs beforehand.
Good choice of music, the voice over creates tension as well as making the situation clear. The effects you have added make the scenes confusing which adds to the atmosphere. I think you could have added more sound effects for improvement as the ones you did add worked really well.
ReplyDeleteThis video was very well thought of, and it shows in your work. The music goes very well with the piece and so does the voiceover. It really gives it a eery feeling, which makes the audience want to watch on. The actors really help to create that eery feeling, so well done
ReplyDeleteHello Tom,
ReplyDeleteReally like the effects you have used, and the voice over works really well and make the story line allot clearer, however a few more camera angles and shots would add to the atmosphere of the story line.
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